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The Signless…
The Sufferer…
You had just witnessed the worst possible thing. A troll just wanting change for a better Alternia… And now the troll who you had a crush on and had a possible crush on you just showed you the torture of the Sufferer. Was it a warning of what would happen if you betrayed the Highblood? Was he placing down the consequences of freedom?
Or… An attempt of an outing?


Hell no. Why the fuck would that even come to mind? It wasn't even close to an outing. It was more like a… You can't even THINK of a word to describe it. As you slowly mopped the floor in the room, it was completely covered in blood. No new news. It always was like that.

~Grand Highblood POV~

You growled as you spied on _______ cleaning the floor. She didn't seem satisfied with the wonderful presentation. Why the hell not? The little lowblooded motherfucker… Why is she such a motherfucking coward? God dammit. The little bitch never is impressed by anything you do. You try. You try your BEST, GOD DAMMIT!!! What is WITH her?! You've tried almost EVERYTHING!!! And does that please her? NO!!! SHE NEVER IS PLEASED BY WHAT YOU DO!!!

NEVER WILL SHE BE PLEASED BY ANYTHING!!!
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH HER?!
EVERYTHING YOU'RE DOING IS PERFECT!!!

You turn away from _______ and go to your throne. As you sat down, you pondered about what you haven't tried yet… You gave her stuff already… The show was a motherfucking BACKFIRE… What the fuck next? You don't know what to do… Everything was perfect. And everything that pleases you MUST be pleased by HER AS WELL!!! What are you doing wrong?
Are you actually missing something?
… But, what could it be if you're actually missing something?

~Your POV~

You were finally done cleaning all the blood off the floor. You never knew that he actually smite his own blue-blood soldiers…
Actually, it wasn't much of a surprise. Alright, that marks the end of your chores. Now to go back into your cellar. You put the mop and water bool away inside the utility closet-

Wait.
Is someone… Watching you? You quickly spin around, looking to see if someone was behind you.
Huh. Nobody. Your imagination? Whatever. You walked to the staircase that lead to your cellar, when you felt the feeling of being watched again… You turned around once more…
Okay, still no one. Maybe the sight from yesterday still made you jumpy? You kept walking and tread up the stairs. You've had a habit of holding tightly on the railing. You've fallen numerous times down the stairs in the past, you you walk carefully up and down them.
You reached the top of the stairs and turned to the direction of your cellar.

… Okay, what the fuck. You feel as though you're being watched again.
You didn't even look behind you. Paranoia. Yeah, it was happening. But, it won't take over you. You finally reached the door, but the guard looked like he was going to shit himself. He quickly opened the door and shoved you inside.
… What was that all about?
OHMAN I FINALLY UPDATED!!! WOOT!!!
And now, the first POV change! It was kinda hard for me... I didn't know how to do the Grand Highblood for a POV. I feel like it's SERIOUSLY out of character. If you want to prove me wrong, then thanks :3

Homestuck= Andrew Hussie

You= The Grand Highblood
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Niya-A-wonderland Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll be watching you. Added to my devWatch! 



For more updates on this!!! Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] +favlove :love: Heart Love Let me love yous plz 
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SolluxanderHamilton Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016
Excuse me if I didn't get the memo, but I see that you haven't updated in around 3 years. I apologize if I'm bothering you and you're busy, but I really like how you've written this and I'm excited for a new update.

Onto feedback, because I feel that all writers need a little feedback- you're GHB was accurate as far as I could tell, and the spelling and grammar was mostly on point. I will ask, however, what you meant by "water bool" in the line, "You put the mop and the water bool back in the utility closet." Otherwise, I could see no errors. Looking forward to a Part 4, if you're writing one!
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ponylover1932 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think since buckets are used for... Yeah... That the author was thinking that they'd use "bools" instead or something like that
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DolphinBowties563 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016  Student General Artist
I love this story so much X33
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FlynnIsNowIrish Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
please continue this is the best GHB x Reader I've ever read meow 
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:icongalaxyundertalefalls:
Please continue!
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treble133 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
continue as a pieces  Her Imperious Condescension commands it
 
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kasukabe12 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
plz cont YOU CANT LEAVE THE PEOPLE HANGING!!!
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xxYorukoxx Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016
Well to be fair, we have literally no evidence to indicate GHB was one of the highbloods that was involved with the capture and execution of Signless. If there is, it's literally only that when Dualscar betrayed Mindfang and reported information on her, GHB is the one he went to. As far as the hemospectrum goes, despite the murderstuck intro of sober!Gamzee we have no indicator that he cared much about the hemospectrum. Heck, if anything the fact that he indifferently killed Dualscar over a failed joke is evidence that he didn't care, or that something made him stop caring. Since the little tidbit in Mindfang's journal regarding her capture is literally all we know about him, it's completely up to personal interpretation.
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BBoredington Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
dude continue this motherfucking shit plz bro
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FlynnIsNowIrish Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
dude i see you everywhere xD

you must be stalking me or im stalking you and i dont know XD
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:iconbboredington:
BBoredington Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
We both might be stalking each other XD
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FlynnIsNowIrish Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*le gasp*
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someSocks590 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do a part four......
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shadowstar6265 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue this I absolutely love it
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DarkEcila Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
hmmm..will there be more?
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kiki-chan99 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2015
Part 4, please!! I love this!
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DragonStorm118 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
More PLEEEAAASE
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Bella789y Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
444444444444444
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meganthebat22 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist
This is such a good x reader ^^
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Thea0605 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
i love this! cant wait for part 4!
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MissSammyMoose2537 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015
Part 4, please.100 Emotes! 
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taytaybatz Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you going to make a part 4?
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legoninjagogirl Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student General Artist
update pls
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gamzeesqueen Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015
please update?
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munchkinhead Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Student General Artist
Please please please upd8 this!
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d347H5Lull4by Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
Please update this, it's awesome!
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Aimee-Wolv Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
dude I love this <3
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MomoBio-Fan Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEEE UPDATE WITH SUGER AND FAYGO ON TOP!!
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chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please send me the link for part 4 when you update
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OutCastAndProud Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
Please don't leave with a cliff-hanger...
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Kita-Sona Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
please update!
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FemTC Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Please continue don't leave us at the cliff hanger
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ItalyVe26 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Moreeee? ;^;
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Danni198 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.......please continue..... Pleaaase e3e
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grandFUCKINhighblood Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Professional Artist
if ya can't be me I suggest a colab. HOW ABOUT IT MOTHERFUCKER?!
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lemonluvs Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
This story is amazing, well put, and keeps me on the edge of my seat, this keeps me wondering
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irzombiemoose Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
PLEASE UPDATE ILU
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bubblvicous Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student
mooooore pweeeaaaase!!!!!!
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DarkSpiritKitsune Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
This is pretty adorable.
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ashsuoh Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
update Miketsukami Puppy Dog Eyes Icon 
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dayofdarkness13 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I am loving this so far!!!! I hope you update soon ///_^
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Icy-Roulette Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
More pls ; o ;
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Terezilover221 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student Artist
.-. ....I need...MOORRREEEE
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tavyy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jawdrop this would be my face if it was the GHB lol
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AudioReciver Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Hmmm...take a guess.
*Grand Highblood over shoulder*
Hi there👋😅.

*wishing to see more*
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DekoAndDemo Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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murrayb Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Good story I look forward to the nexts
chapter
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Hoodetie Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014
Pleeeeeeeeeeease update this!
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Zalee Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
this is amazing. please update as soon as you can
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